Monday, May 25, 2009

The Window

This window across my garden
Used to open
And to close

Whenever it opened
There was fear
That it would close back

Whenever it closed
There was hope
That it would open back

There was fear
And there was hope
Until this window closed once
Once and for all

V K Rajan

4 comments:

  1. great one this! loved it! i liked it a lot! loved the last paragraph...great imagination...sir, you shuld work out a story or a poem with me....

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  2. I personally feel this would make a great masterpiece..so simple yet captivating!

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  3. Thanks for reading. Sure, we can work together.

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