Monday, May 18, 2009

A children's poem I wrote- Please don't ring the doorbell


Please don’t ring the doorbell

Please don't ring the doorbell!

Please don’t do!

I am doing my homework,

And cleaning my messy shoe!


The homework’s due on Monday

And I have just one day!

And no time to play!

And no time to stay!


As for the shoe,

I would make it shine

In just an hour

Or just before 9


As for the doorbell,

I have removed it!

And leave It, never to ring

Never to hit!


So,

Please don’t ring the doorbell

Please don’t do!

I am doing my homework,

And cleaning my messy shoe!



Srinidhi.R

5 comments:

  1. u write well srinidhi.i liked this poem and the other post. Good.

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  2. thanksssssssssssssss for reading

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  3. you knoow this poem written in the view point of a kid who is busy polishing his "shoes"..wellall i want to know is how in the world can you write somthing that i can always relate to..!..( i mean always)..:-)
    i mean i was just so like this kid when i was growing up..indulgent and independent..!
    but all the same lovely poem dude..!
    i love it..! :-)
    t

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  4. short and simple but still fun to read

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  5. thank u all for ur wonderful comments...

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