Good poems both. Try to pack a punch in the last lines as you have in the first lines.
...Imagining they would give me almsImagining that they are I.
nice one...! u know i personally never give money or "chutta" to beggars...i try and give in food...maybe a bun or somthing..!
Good poems both. Try to pack a punch in the last lines as you have in the first lines.
ReplyDelete...Imagining they would give me alms
ReplyDeleteImagining that they are I.
nice one...!
ReplyDeleteu know i personally never give money or "chutta" to beggars...
i try and give in food...maybe a bun or somthing..!