Tuesday, July 14, 2009

THE TANGENT..!





The tangent of your love touches me deep,
Cris crossing along my shadow,
I ran all the way up to you,
yet somehow i don't seem to have moved.
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4 comments:

  1. RASHMI RAOJuly 14, 2009 at 3:54 AM

    I am trying my hand at four liners!
    and Sir V.K Rajan inspires me..because I so envy him possessing the skills to write up four liners.

    So I thought I did atleast try..!

    Let me know what you think..

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  2. RajanJuly 14, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    This is fabulous! If you have started so well I guess you will be making us swoon soon. I find everything that makes for a good four-liner here: economy of words, coherence, and the mathematical precision! Great one! keep it up!

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  3. sreekumar nairJuly 14, 2009 at 10:29 PM

    Extremly well written. I liked it.

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  4. srinidhi111July 17, 2009 at 7:58 PM

    superb! VERY GOOD ONE!

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