Friday, June 19, 2009

girl phobia - an ignorance


melancholy in the aura
in a home
that was exhuberant for 9 months
waiting impatiently for water
in the desert of their solitude life

then the tragedy ... happened
a dark storm came;
sands of hope migrated to infinite distances
trash left
trash is a persevarant burden
that they have to keep for the rest of their lives
they cannot throw it
the storm was god's punishment for their misdeeds
in their previous life
they believe this
they are god fearing

they are mistaken
dark clouds were mistaken for a storm
that would not disappear before giving rains
of bliss
shower the drops of freshness
sustenance and hope
seeds of prosperity will give rise to the plants
gifting fruits as well as shade
gruesome heat that gripped them for ages
would flee away
crispness in the air .

ignorance will cost them heavily
society and country too.

4 comments:

  1. thanks sir.your comments always help me.

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  2. It really seems like u feel for this..!
    i like it..!
    u have described the whole evils against us with very very abstract lines...! i like the whole comparison..and trust me..a dumb head wont understand ur poem, which makes u unique coz there is a lotta meaning a person could derive from this poem..
    Infact intelligently constituted lines..! :-)

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