Searching my lost identity, I followed the path of success,
Passing the lovely path, I found lovely successful people.
Few liked me, few hated, but all were successful,
I greeted their comments and followed the path of success.
Lost in my vicinity, I came to dead end,
Broken, lost, I recollected where I went wrong.
As I followed same path other successful people followed,
Looked around everywhere, only to find no one to support.
I started returning as I remembered people I met,
They had one thing in common, they never gave up.
I turned to dead end, searched way out for very long,
My strength was my soul, I heard and kept trying.
Finally I was through and successful too,
But learnt one thing, there is no such path of success.
We make it, if we have it in us.
Still I have a lot to achieve than to loose.
Poem is perfect. But the font u used inspired me to write the above poem on the yellow colour. Srry don't mind. It is good.
ReplyDeletei don't mind at all, i need to learn a lot. Well i did a deep research in colors as i needed to choose my logo color. All the best
ReplyDeleteThe message in the poem is great
ReplyDeletevery good .definetely we should never lose hope in life
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